One lovely beautiful day these 2 boys Daniel and James find it funny to go into a forest. So one day they went into the forest and went deep. When James said to Daniel , I think we should go back, but when they turned back they seemed to get lost. So what they did is call their friends to come and help them. their friends ayla and alora came to help them they went deep into the forest to find them. But well daniel and james were waiting they got bored so they went even more deeper into the forest. James and Daniel stopped, they heard alora and ayla at the back of them so they turned and they saw them. When they were finding their way back they didn’t realize that they were going even deeper into the forest. But when they got to the end of the forest they all saw a haunted house, james and daniel ran into the house thinking that it was a good idea but when ayla and alora heard a scream they ran into the house as fast as they can and opened the door and saw james flying in the air and daniel just looking at him screaming, then the door just random slammed and then james dropped down to the grown and it went really quiet daniel reached out to james and pulled james to him. Ayla went up to james and saw that he had some cuts and scratches on his hand so she got some bandanas to rap around it but just then when she was done the radio started to play and a voice was saying on the radio that said , you will have to find the key to the invisible door if you want to be free you don’t have a time you can find the key and go through some scary challenges you will have to pass 10 rounds to get the key, then the radio turned off then they all got off the floor and walked around the house to find the first door. When they found the first door they all went in and……….. There was nothing there so they just walked in and then…….. Boo they all screamed and then the ran to the other door and slammed it they all were to scared to go through the other door but then james went to open the second door and they all saw some red lights daniel said that it does not look scary so all of them shouted at him and said, then you go first, so he did but when he went in there was just outside then all of them went to when they saw a key ayla said, this is not the 10th door then james ran to get the key and then ran out he said to them come follow me when they got to the front door james put the key in and the door open. They all ran as fast as they could and then they came out of the forest and ran home and said bye to each other and told their parents what happened.
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Kia ora Crystal, have you ever been in an escape room. Your narrative sounds even scarier than the one I got stuck in with other teachers, with the eerie radio voices. I am glad the people got out due to each of them being brave. Although sometimes it is just as brave to look at something and realise it is dangerous before starting. I am curious what your narrative would look like as a pick a path.
Thank you for the feed back, I’m also curios what my narrative would look like as a pick a path as well but again thank you for the feed back!